Monday, August 27, 2012

Gast & Palz: Episode 12 - A Future of Frustration







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  1. Sorry for the filler guys. We'll get back to the main story in Episode 13. I just came up with this idea after using the ghost Kanassan =D.

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    1. Come to think of it this turned out much better than chapter 13...

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    1. Think this is my favorite chapter yet xD I love TFS's Kanassan.

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    2. This was the Old Sage Kanassan. After a certain age, Kanassans begin to see the future of the other universes as well!

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    3. That must be confusing as fuck! XD

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    4. @~I-Am-So-Original
      Come to think of it, I should've kept one of the Old Sages alive in case the Palz ever visit Planet Kanassa.


      By the way @Cane Moreno how did your comment get deleted? It says "removed by the author" but I didn't delete anything.

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    5. You could say one of them somehow escaped in a leftover spacepod or something^^

      And you are not the author of the comment, but Cane Moreno, so he should be the one who deleted it.

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    6. That's an idea! Although I think the Kanassan would be more annoyed with Zail than Zail is annoyed of him.

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    7. Zail vs. FURURE! guy! The ultimate annoy-down!

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  3. Filler? I love this chapter!!! lololol

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  4. king cold, at least that was the least annoying Kanassan.

    Btw scar want to help me come up for a good name for a female brolly? what i will use it for is a secret.

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    1. Hmm Brola, Brolina, Brona, Brolisha? Since his name came from broccoli you could choose something closer to that like Brocca, Broccina, Brocna, Broccola, etc. Will it be used for a fan fiction or maybe a new alias?

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    2. haha already guessed it, i've been writing a fanfic about a female brolly. though the way it is now the prologue of the damn thing is gonna be long... hope i wont need to break it up, that would make me sad. anyway some names i have found on the internet relating to this. I have been using the word Serabi in place of her name right now though.


      Broccoli- Broc, Brock, Brokk, Burokk, Buroki, Buroli, Buroi, Okkoli, Oko, Boko, Boli, Burli, Burki, Burali, Coli, Kori, Comi, Koni, Burk

      Trying to have one that sounds like a girls name and doesn't sound stupid. i noticed that is hard to do with saiyan names. i might end up making her name related to celery.

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    3. I'd love to read it once you finish the prologue. Is the story about a female LSSJ or Broly who somehow turned into a female?
      I think Broly's Japanese name is Burori. You could try Burora, Burona, Burla, Burna, Burlina, Bristen (Kristen), Brannon (Shannon), Bristy (Kristy), Brolene, Bromanda (Amanda), Broliet (Juliet), Brophia (Sophia), Brizabeth (Elizabeth), Blaire (Claire), Braylee (Kaylee), Brazandria (Alexandria), Brolivia (Olivia), Brestiny (Destiny).

      It's kinda hard to make a female name for Broly because his name starts with "Bro". Instead of Bro-ly you could have Sis-ly =D.

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    4. a female LSSJ. technically speaking its a what if broly was born female. but instead of jumping straight to the movie i am starting with childhood so yeah, not much dbz cannon till then. just need to find a way to explain how her insanity and malicious intent grew through out her childhood in a way that wont make me have to make it MA for excessive violence and adult themes. though i read a fanfic that had gohan go through torture and eat corpses. kinda not to worried about that.

      Sisly lol


      btw my update schedule for the thing would be very relaxed, since i am making it for fun. and know i would definitely not be able to do a chapter per week.

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    5. Oh ok. Well you could always choose a different vegetable since it's not easy coming up with a female version of Broly.

      I noticed most fan fics have a pretty slow update schedule. Multiverse and Bringer of Death are the only ones I can think of with a set schedule. I'll probably go back to one or two episodes a month once school starts. So I say take your time and have fun with it.

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  5. At some point it seemed to get a bit long, but in hindsight it was perfect buildup for the punchline^^
    I don't mind this kind of filler^^
    (Especially since it doesn't actually delay the main story.)

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  6. We can congratulate Cold for trying to link all this mess ! :)

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